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Review:Magicabounds says:
Really missing the magical aspect of all this. Integrating into the muggle world is great, but this is way to much. You're getting way to much into explanation of what's going on. The reader should not have to have this much detail to understand where you want to go with your ideas. You need to be in the magical world more with less importance on the muggle world and laws. Your writing is very good, but I was hoping for more in depth of their lives and less of their work. I guess just more of the original characters writhe the addition of the new people

Author's Response: Magicabounds,

Thank you for taking the time to review "Grand Trine." I appreciate your advice and will keep it in mind as I move forward. To some extent, it is what one reviewer called "chewing the scenery" that is my natural style. I quite like imagining their responses to the Muggle world and how the personalities and talents they bring from magic play out as they create their Muggle identities.

But, I'm sure I sometimes write as much for the fun of the writing as for the story, so thanks for your review. It's early for me to see what is too much, I'll need another pass, but the rest of the story isn't posted or final. I'll keep my eyes open.

Bill


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