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Review:Bardic Magic says:
Broadway Lion,

You are as astute as you are gracious! Thank you for my part in your Forward. It was very well written and you brought up some good points. I will not answer them all, at this time, but I would like to clear up one (or maybe two) of your questions.

James and Lily did, indeed, live in Potter Hall. You may remember (of course, I don't expect everyone to know my stories as well as I do) Constance the House Elf mentioning that she was Lily's midwife when Harry was born.

That also clears up your question as to where Harry was born...not in Godric's Hollow, but in Potter Hall.

I will clear up one more of your questions (at least, from my story's point of view). When Harry went to the vault he had inherited (Chapter 37 - Rings and Things) he had to produce a list to find what he was looking for, since the Potter fortune was so vast, it being in one of the largest vaults Gringott's had. This is a clear indication that James had inherited the Potter fortune already, himself. Thus, his parents had both passed on before he died at Voldemort's hand. Another indication would be the chapter in which I described Leal and Constance telling Harry that Master James and Mistress Lily had gone into hiding and perished without giving them permission to have elflings.

Just thought I would clear those things up without writing another 39 chapter story...although...

Thanks again, Broadway Lion for taking such an interest in my story...I feel honored that someone would write a story based, even in part, on my ideas!! Can't wait to read more!!

In deepest appreciation, Bardic Magic

Author's Response: Many thanks on your comments. Harry of Potter Hall is coming along very nicely, but I am going to get the first story validated before I start posting more on this book. (Only 24 more chapters to go!) Obviously (as Sanpe was wont to say) The chapters will be very much longer in this new book, just to get them validated faster. Perhaps when I publish on paper (moc tod ulul) I will call these major divisions and then add shorter sub-divisions as real chapters.

BTW, I was at the zoo yesterday, and my friend RAMU (he's a tiger) is looking good and now weighs in at 400 pounds.

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