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Review:krazyboutharryginny says:
Hey, I'm here for CTF.

This was sweet! I must admit, I love a good Muggle AU. This was really short, so it wasn't exactly a super in-depth AU, but I think you have is a healthy amount of backstory - that Sirius and Remus went to high school together and have known each other that long is about all of the backstory we need for this, and that little tidbit of Sirius being intimidated by Remus's father is the cherry on top :)

I thought this was very believable in terms for characterization, with Remus being more practical but still a bit mischievous (with his dry, sarcastic sort of tone and light teasing) and Sirius being a bit more lighthearted and a bit of a brat (but in an endearing way hahaha). I really enjoyed the way that the two of them played off of each other, it was, again, very believable.

I do have a bit of a critique, which is that I found it a little odd that Sirius/the narrative kept referring to Remus as Lupin. The first time it made sense to me and I thought it was cute, but I thought it was strange that he was never referred to as anything else, and it especially stuck out to me in the last paragraph when Sirius was thinking about his plan to propose. I think a few "Remus"s would be good :)

That said, I really enjoyed reading this and I thought it was super cute! Great work!

-Kayla

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