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Review:Scooterbug8515/Marshal says:
So, I jumped into the story without looking at the summary. Within 1 sentence I knew that the narrator was a female. So massive kudos to you for having such a good voice with your character that they were quickly identifiable. Of course with it being Hannah I didn't know it was her as we know so little of her but still the story speaks well even if you don't know who exactly is speaking.

The romance of the date here was perfect so sweet, romantic, believable and perfect. I was swept away in the moment as I read the story. I find it interesting you putting Susan and Hannah together. As I was reading I wondered for a moment about Neville as in cannon he marries Hannah, not saying that Hannah can't be bi by any means! Though if you don't have Hannah and Neville get together and have Hannah as only a Lesbian that is cool too. Both ideas work but with you introducing Neville into the story here at the end of the chapter makes me wonder a little particularly when she does remark that he is cute and then is shocked that it is Neville. Makes me wonder a bit what is in store next and how you will take the story.

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