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Review:Dojh167 says:
Hufflepuff CtF Review

HELLO FLAG AUTHOR AND FLAG STORY

I think itís really creative to take an idea for a song fic and stretch it out longer than a one shot.

At first I was uncertain if the protagonist here was Rose or Scorpius. It seemed more expected that Scorpiusí family would be the one to have big parties. I canít see Ron or Hermione really enjoying hosting them, but I suppose thatís what a big ministry career demands. I canít blame Rose for hating them.

There were a couple little typos in this, but nothing that a beta reader or another proofread couldnít fix.

I enjoy ďstupid quaffle headĒ as an insult. Haha, and then she keeps laying it on thck with snitch brain! XD

Wow, James. Bullying people into not even talking to Rose? Do not like.

Oh, this is the first time Rose has met Scorpius? I like that better - that she sympathizes with Slytherins not because she likes him, but because she has all of the empathy James missed out on. It also says something about her that she didnít recognize him, the most famous Slytherin.

Ahh! She didnít recognize him because he changes his appearance. Thatís interesting. Scorpius as a shy metamorphagus is pretty darn cute.

How mysterious that he wouldnít give her his fake name =P

Rose has had things pretty rough from her family, and Iím glad to see she is finally making a good friend(/maybe more) and hope that things improve for her.

Congrats on posting your first story!

Sam.

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