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Review:Dojh167 says:
Hufflepuff CtF Review

Wow, what a fascinating idea for a story! I donít think Iíve ever seen anything like this.

It makes me really sad that Remus had to unnecessarily ostracize himself from what society he had. Things were already really and for him and this just made it worse. At least Dumbledore owns up to that.

I daresay Dumbledore has a lot of ďOne of my greatest regretsĒ

I makes me so sad that Remus has even fallen out with the other marauders. And here he and James are talking so formally to each other, it really hurts my heart.

Haha, Dumbledore poking into the tense moment with a lemon square.

Wow, Remus really thinks Dumledore would ask him to bite someone. That really speaks to the fact that Remus thinks that he is good for nothing beyond being a werewolf.

Iím kind of confused why there needs to be a switching. If itís so they have someone with them whoís better at defensive spells, why canít they just add a bodyguard to the family? But I think we just kind of need to go with the premise here to get to the interesting content.

I really like how you described Remus identifying the changes in his new body. Not just the obvious like the different vision, but the way his muscles felt and his senses functioned. Remus is taking a bit risk with this switch and he knows it, but it also offers him freedom like he has not had before.

Oh, thatís really interesting that even though itís not a full moon itís a very active struggle to fight against the wolf.

Omg Iím already confused who Dumledoreís talking to when he says James and Remus XD

Again, this is a very interesting start and I am very curious to find out what happens. Can I pretend Remus!James doesnít die? Cause I donít want that.


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