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Review:Anonymous says:
I think you have a good story here. I enjoy the plot line and your vision, admire it really. The story does move a little fast though, like you're rushing to write the words. I can understand that, but personally suggest you take your time with the finer details of your plot and move slower. Quality, not quantity.

Author's Response: Thank you for your suggestion. This story started out as a exercise in writing more concisely and I realized that 1k words per chapter was not enough for me. I'm just not good at it. I plowed through anyway, hoping that practice would make it better but I am afraid it is too disjointed. I am going to rework my newer chapters and see how that goes and try not to neurotically care about the word count.

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