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Review:Dojh167 says:
Hufflepuff CtF Review

I like how you referred to the moon in the opening name just as “the celestial body.” The indirectness there indicates an aversion, kind of like that-in-the-sky-which-must-not-be-named

I wonder if Remus’ feverish symptoms have to do with his transformation, or if he’s also sick. Being both at once must be awful!

Ooooh maybe this is the first full moon when they all transform together! I normally go into short Remus stories expecting them to be very dark and hopeless, but perhaps this one is different! That’s good - Remus deserves some good times, and we deserve some happier Remus stories!

Oh, is this after the marauders sneaked Snape into discovering Remus? I suppose I never knew whether that was before or after they became animagi.

I’m really impressed that they were able to keep that a secret! And also very impressed that they were able to do the research and magic without Remus’ help.

I really like how you incorporate “run” into this story, first with Remus demanding that the others run away, and then with them having the freedom to run together ♥

Haha, Remus transformed just in time to not waste breath objecting to what was already done =P

Haha, the others promptly argueing about nicknames while Remus tries to be the (loudly) sensible one =P

HAHAHA James and Sirius shut up for a month, they are such self sacrificing friends =

This was super fun, and very refreshing for a Remus story! Nicely done.


Author's Response: I always thought this would end up being the happiest period of Remus' life despite the inevitable conflict he would be feeling.
I think the marauders would almost always try to introduce humour to every situation, and would view this as an adventure as much as a way to help their friend. Bless them.
I also find the thought of them being unable to talk for a month hilarious :D :D :D
Thank you so much for the review xxx

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