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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
It reminded you of the ocean, of waters so deep you could drown into them and never reach the bottom.

Eyes really are a window to our soul. I really don't think about what eyes can tell you about a person. You really lay that out here wonderfully.

No, it isn't the colour.

I like this because the same could be said about the color of a person's skin. You know when people are rude and they're like how could you date so and so they look like (insert something rude here). It's not about the color. It's about the way the person makes you feel. You just can't help it.

It is her kindness, her generosity, the way she always tries to offer assistance to everyone,

I adore this entire portion of the story here. I have some tears that are forming in my eyes. He really just loves the entire essence that is Lily Evans.

I LOVED THIS. It was perfection. The songs really added a different element to the story. I could see the dancing right before me, the happiness radiating off of them and that kiss...well, I need some water because I'm overheated. I liked that you switched it up and gave us some input from her side. We were able to feel what she felt and to know her intentions were true.

Really great job with this story! I'm absolutely gushing here.

Author's Response: Hey, Deeds!
Thank you so much for this absolutely amazing review!

Yes, I agree that eyes can really tell a lot of people, and everyone always mentioned how wonderful Lily's eyes were. I'm sure that's something James would have noticed, too.

I really didn’t think about that, but I like that it made you think of it. And obviously I agree with you, colour really doesn't matter...

Yes, he does! :D I'm a bit Jily shipper, if that wasn't obvious... :P

I'm so glad you loved Lily's POV as well. The dancing scene was probably my favourite part to write. And I'm so glad that the songs fit, too, and that you loved their kiss!

Thank you so much again, so glad you loved the story!

Snowball hug,
Chiara


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