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Review:nott theodore says:
CTF Jailbreak Review

Hi Renee! It's been so long since I got to read any of your writing, so it's lovely to have an excuse to come back now! And this was such a lovely and wonderful start to the story! I already love the premise of this story - I have read some one-shots which focus on the relationship between Lily and Petunia, but I don't think I've ever read anything that's longer than that - now I'm wondering why because this seems like the perfect way to explore their relationship as sisters through the years.

I loved that you started this story on the day that Lily was born, but the narrative focus was on Petunia so I actually really warmed up to her as a character here. You wrote her so well - I could easily picture the little girl outside, waiting to know what's happening because she's still at the age when she doesn't entirely understand what is going on. Your description of her as she was waiting was so cute and lovely.

It's pretty unusual that their dad was gone and there while Lily was born, I think, at this point in time. It helps to build up the potential for jealousy more though.

The description of her stomach wriggling as Petunia met Lily for the first time was great - but I loved how quickly it turned sour when she got jealous of Lily being called her nickname. It seems natural enough for the older sibling to get upset and jealous at this point because the attention they receive moves onto someone else, but it also felt more serious than that, especially since we know how bad the relationship between the sisters becomes.

Sian :)

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