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Review:Felpata Lupin says:
Hello, my sweet Sophie! I'm here to review for CTF! I've missed you...

Aww... this was so sad... And so sweet at the same time... You know how to get to my feels, don't you? (Also, we share a love for Remus... :P)

The perspective was really interesting, they say you see all your life before your eyes when you are going to die, I experienced something similar once when I was a kid (I thought I was drowning) and it'seems really true... but I'm digressing, as usual.

The point is, I love the idea that it all happens in the very instant Remus is striken by the Killing Curse and then it's all a sequence of flashes of all the most significative moments of his life. I loved how you managed to include all this in such a short time.

(Side note, I'm using the word love in reference to your writing, I didn't enjoy seeing my Remus die, it was all quite heartbreaking)

Anyway, I loved how you wrote his relationship with Dora, the slowly growing feelings, the Constant fighting with himself and questioning all his choices, the happiness she gave him despite all his insecurities.

It really made me sad when you referenced to his loneliness and to the society's rejection. You can see why he didn't want to bring the people he loved most down with him (I still want to hit him on the head for his stupidity)

I loved the moment when Teddy was born... Poor child, this is so unfair... *hugs Teddy*

Sorry, I have to go now... lovely story, though, as always!

Tons of hugs, honey!
Chiara

Author's Response: Chiara!
How fab to hear from you! Apologies for the delay in replying. I've gone back to work and haven't had a great deal of time.
I love this song so much, and it seemed to work so well for our Moony. It is heartbreaking and beautiful and gives all the feels!
I adored writing this so much. And thank you so much for the review!!

Loads of love to you lovely x


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