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Review:SunshineDaisies says:
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO CUTE.

I'm here to bust Sam out of jail for capture the flag :)

SO, that was just so darn adorable I can't even handle it. I LOVE Jily, they are truly my OTP, so I was very pleased to read this little gem! It's been a long time since I've read a nice fluffy piece, I think this satisfied a craving I didn't quite know I was having.

You set the scene so beautifully here, I could feel the sun beating on my shoulders, and the pure joy that comes with a beautiful summer day with the people you love.

I loved James fooling around with his friends. Of course Sirius cheated ;) It was so nice to experience this brief period of calm amidst the storm we all know is brewing around them. I loved Lily's inner commentary as well, there is something just so nice about watching someone you love being totally carefree, relaxed, and happy. It's definitely infectious (I think especially so with James), and I really liked being able to see Lily relaxed and happy too. Poor girl has more than enough stress to deal with, she deserves a day like this.

I'm super glad you didn't just totally ignore the war going on, and all the stress they are dealing with. It makes the whole moment that much sweeter.

Watching Lily fall asleep on James was too adorable, and the fact that she said she loved him as she was drifting off to sleep is just UGH. SO CUTE. And James's reaction when she woke up! He's so excited that she loves him and he loves her too and they're just so happy and I WANT THIS MOMENT TO LAST FOREVER. I think I'm going to pretend that it does. Thanks for a moment of bliss :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the fab review. I liked the idea of them having a little pocket of time to just forget everything and be carefree teens, although it never really goes away all together. There is something magical about spending time in the sun with loved ones!!

I'm so happy you enjoyed. Thank you so much again xx


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