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Review:Dojh167 says:
Hufflepuff CtF Review

I almost read one of your darker stories, but I had to remind myself that happy stories exist! It seems only kind to me (and my inevitable jailbreaker) that I donít read all pain all the time ;)

I as confused by a moment that you included ďChapter 1Ē at the beginning of this story, and I had to go back and check whether it was really a one shot or a WIP.

I was also a little thrown by Lily sitting at Jamesí pool, which made me think for a moment that maybe this was a muggle AU, but I suppose thereís no reason wizards canít have swimming pools =P

Hahaha I love the idea of Sirius winning a cannonball competition. Itís very dog-like. I wonder if he enjoys swimming more as a human or a dog. I wonder if that played any role in his cheating, though I imagine cannonballs are more efficient in human form

I find it kind of touching that James asks Lily why sheís with him. Heís normally so loudly confident, and that speaks to a quieter more insecure side of hm that we usually see.

Omg James stupid face hat canít stop grinning at Lily is so cute

This is all just incredibly cute, and Iím glad I let myself have some fluff! In a funny way, the tone of the story and how it is a little moment of respite amidst the context of a darker world parallels me reading lots of dark stories and coming in for this happy little break =P

I enjoyed this a lot, well done!

Sam.

Author's Response: Awww thank you. What a lovely review. With the chapter one thing, I think it's just habit. Apologies for the confusion. :)
OMG Sirius swimming as a dog is brilliant. I love that idea. I bet he would transform to win races and competitions!

I do enjoy writing fluff every so often. As you say it's a fun respite. And Jily fluff is so fun. I always think she must bring out his insecurities!!

Thank you so much again x


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