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Review:Marshal says:
Your descriptions are beautiful. I really liked your word choices here such as the choice of sapphire instead of blue or auburn instead of read. In a lot of ways it helped to make the images more vivid and colorful.

Was the broom you have Molly riding an invention of your own? If so kudos on creating a new name. Also the maneuver that she was trying to pull is that canon or an invention of your own. I can never remember all my quidditch plays but then again there are a lot of them. Still I love how daring Molly is despite being in Ravenclaw.

I like how you took things with her and Christopher. It was simple, cute and sweet - I love how Molly is sort of dying inside at the fact that Christopher knows who she is and thinks that he wouldn't know who she is. The ending is really cute particularly the bit that her hand was still in his. The trail off that you have here makes me want to read more in a lot of ways but at the same time it is a nice trail off to the end. It is not often that ellipses like that can signify the end of a story/chapter but it works here. I'm guessing as this is a one shot that the rest of the story is in something else of yours and this was just a snapshot from the main story?

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