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Review:Eyo says:
What! Is is legal to have this kind of cliff-hanger! Hehe.

I didn't see that a new chapter was out since some time what a good surprise for me! I really loved this chapter I mean I love both James and Popie so having them discuss is really neat. Their exchange are really well written I think. Your talent of mixing serious/angst stuff and humour is perfect this is definitely one of the thing I love in your style.
I'm pretty happy to see that James is able to be nice while still being arrogant and smart. I love the way you make him.
Popie being still mean and sarcastic is a real pleasure. It's also nice to see I was right for her parents even if it wasn't very difficult to guess. I hope that even when she'll be closer and more open to James she will keep a big part of this attitude.
I cannot wait to read the next and I'm very sad to learn that you have a writer block. I don't know if that can help you even a bit but here are the points I love in your story.
The personnage of James, he is arrogant but that doesn't mean he's a bastar and also pretty smart. The personnage of Popie for her dark history, her agressivity and her punchline! Also I guess when she's surprise/natural as we see a bit in this chapter she is quite endearing. Also Free is really your funny card and you use him pretty well.
I also love this mix of angst and humour as I say before. And I hope the story of Popie is really tragic. Your dialogue are also extremely good. I cannot wait to begin to learn a bit about Evan backstory and actually all the other also.
I just hope that Popie not going to open up to everyone totally and that it will mainly be James!

Thanks for this long chapter in final period it was perfect to change a bit my mind leaving me with a smile.

Author's Response: This is an extremely hard review to reply to as you seem to have a talent for predicting what i am going to do next! :)) But i am so glad that you are enjoying this story and Poppy and James! And we are both making eachother smile as this review has made my day 10x better, thank you sooo much!!

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