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Review:nott theodore says:
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Hi Marshal! I'm really glad that I keep getting chances to come back to this story, as I'm really enjoying the chance to read it. It definitely is so different to any story I've read so far, and I think that's saying something since I've read quite a lot of fanfiction by now :P

Remus's concern for James is really touching at the start of this chapter, and very in character for him, too. He's not the sort of person who wants to burden anyone else with his problems - he's reluctant to even get into a relationship with Tonks because of it, let alone enable his best friend to suffer what he's spent a lifetime suffering from.

I liked the little detail about the fact that Remus wasn't completely okay with Sirius, but he knew that he had to pretend he was as he's supposed to be James at the moment. That also told me that Sirius had no idea about the switch, too, which I thought was a really clever way of getting the information across.

I thought you wrote Moody really well - I can't imagine that he'd take very kindly to Sirius interrupting the Order meetings when they're trying to plan things like this. It'll be interesting to see if Remus gets to be a part of these missions as well, because he's obviously been doing something very different, and part of me worries that he'll be in danger because of that?

I'm glad we got to see Lily and Lily's reaction to this whole idea - I can't blame her for being angry with the two of them for agreeing to it! I know that James wanted to do it, and that's why Remus agreed to it, but they should never have agreed to any switch if Lily wasn't happy with it. She's the one who has to live with what's going to happen.

Ugh. Oh no. My heart sank at the end of this chapter. I knew this would have to happen but in a way this kind of means that Remus is going to be the one to agree to their deaths...

Sian :)

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