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Review:Marshal says:
You did a nice job with the heart and emotion here. I like how there is a memorial at the school honoring the fallen. I think that is very appropriate and needed. We in the muggle world do it I think it is something that needs to be done in the wizarding world and while not all the names died there at the school a number of them did so having there at Hogwarts was incredibly appropriate.

I feel sad that Harry in some ways can't yet forgive himself and let go and yet it was nice that he did try and that he is still trying to live his life even if he can't have a happily ever after because the people that he wants there in his happily ever after no longer live. Still it was a powerfully done moment and I think you did a nice job depicting the grounds and having the world around Harry reflect that of he heart and feelings without going to the classic raining trope. The cold barren and empty feeling was honestly a beautiful reflection of how Harry feels inside.

Also I like how he lets Ginny ground him and how he leans on her is is a reflection of a good and strong relationship and maybe in time hopefully Harry can learn to forgive himself, maybe not say goodbye but at least move on.

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