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Review:ABlack says:
Ah, how I love that song Ė so powerful and moving, just like this story. You claim not to write angsty stuff well! Well, Iím here to call bullcrap on that!

You paint the scene perfectly, from the garden that will burst into life come spring/summer to the snowflakes landing and the sky darkening. Of course, heíd have to first mourn the place that was had become his home. I love how you touched on the memories he had, particularly Harry recalling the first time heíd seen the castle as a first-year on a little boat.

And Harry reading the names? Ugh! Youíre killing me! Fredís made my heart ached. Then Remus and Sirius. Itís hard to realize that Harry only knew Sirius for only two years. The way Harry thinks of each person as he reads their name just builds up the aching.

I have to admit I was surprised and so pleased that you touched on Severus. Iím so glad you didnít have Harry skip that name because for all that Severus was mean to him or was a damaged person, he did try to protect Harry in his own way.

Folks tell people to move on when theyíve lost someone. But I think that Harry stating he canít leave all them behind and move on is more fitting. You donít ever really leave behind those that youíve lost. You carry the memory of them with you Ė their loss shapes a part of you and there is a painful beauty in that.

Such a wonderful, poignant tale! You did a wonderful job here!

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