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Review:adluvshp says:
Aw, this was a sweet albeit a little funny fic. Draco whining so much and being so sad and bursting into tears is kind of hard to imagine, but I suppose he changed after everything that happened to him in this universe. You explained the backstory comprehensively and that was nice, I got the context of where he is today and where he was and how things were for him. Boy, it's hard to imagine a poor and helpless Draco Malfoy. Imagining him working at a Muggle store is even more crazy - the things you have to do. this really shows how massively war can change things. Angie seems sweet (she is my namesake haha) and i liked that she extended a hand of friendship to draco despite his rude behaviour to the staff. They are all such nice people, the muggles, and it's good Draco is realising that. I feel bad for him honestly so it is sweet things are looking up. Even his mother sent him a christmas card! Though i really think he should take care of her better and try to help her out of depression. The dialogue and monologue both worked well here though I would have certainly liked more narrative description as it would have added to the visual appeal of the story as well. Characterisations could have also been better built with that, but then I suppose it's only a one-shot so it is fine. I enjoyed reading it and if nothing it made me smile.

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