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Review:melian says:
Hi! Here for a CTF review!

Well. This was intense. I admit I didn't read the first chapter and so it took a little bit of time to figure out what was happening, but I got there in the end. Must be something, becoming a werewolf, mustn't it? I confess that things like the heightened sense of smell had never really occurred to me, but then again I can't say I've ever given much thought to what it must be like to actually become the wolf. This is probably because I"ve never written a fic that has required that, but that's my loss, by the looks of things. It makes sense, given the lupine nature of the beast you become, that you would become more sensitive to things like smell, but having it spelled out like this really made me think.

And Rhea. An original character, I expect, but a good one. There would have to be a second in command in the werewolf ranks, wouldn't there? After all, Greyback isn't infallible, as we learned in the Battle of Hogwarts. So someone like Rhea would have to exist, but again, I'd never thought much about it. YOu clearly have. She's an interesting character, and I can tell you've given her a lot of thought, even from that small taste you've given us. And that ultimatum! Heavens. I don't blame James for baulking at it, but I can totally see where she's coming from. No killing? Fine. Just bite someone. So easy for someone like her or Fenrir; so impossible for someone like James or Remus. And so perfect for this chapter.

This is really intriguing. Once CTF is over you might well see me back again to see where it leads. :)

cheers Mel

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