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Review:nott theodore says:
CTF Jailbreak Review

Hi there! Oh wow, this is such an original idea, I can honestly say that it's taken me completely by surprise, and that doesn't happen a lot with fanfiction now. There aren't usually many stories focusing on Remus at all, let alone at this period when he's aware that his friends think he might have been the traitor in their midst. I'm so glad to read this story on him though because he's a great character.

It really breaks my heart to think that Remus had taken on the role of traitor, so to speak, so that they could try and work out who the real traitor in the Order was. That shows a lot of trust in him from Dumbledore, but it also must have been impossibly difficult to know that his friends thought that he was betraying them to Voldemort. It also shows how deeply entrenched the prejudices are in the wizarding world, that even the people working alongside him, and his closest friends, are more likely to think that he's the traitor because of him being a werewolf. That's just so sad. I always think that Remus must have been so lonely after Lily and James were killed, but here we see is that he was actually alone a long time before that.

The idea behind the switch is so good but it's also filling me with foreboding, I don't know whether they'll last until the end (which would then mean that Remus is the one who died and James had to live as Remus for the following years, knowing that Harry was there?) but it's really worrying to think of. And I'm so interested to see how they cope with it in the future, and how it will affect the Order and their friendships.

This is a fantastic idea and I've really enjoyed reading this chapter, I hope that I can get back to read more soon!

Sian :)

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