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Review:lovegood27 says:
Here for Nargles BvB :)

Okay, why have I never left a review or even read this before. *mentally beats up self* This was absolutely hilarious! Lyra's character immediately jumps out to me and it was so much fun to read about her and Scorpius :D

It was interesting to read about a girl who isn't into romance for once. But I get where Lyra's coming from, I would be put off by Albus and Scorpius too (unless she's exaggerating her details lol)

I also liked the way you portrayed the Malfoy family. I already see very little of a next gen Draco as it is, but I honestly have never found a fic that shows him as caring, all for Muggle stuff (movie nights! Why did I get so excited by that?) etc. I think it's likely Draco would have changed, especially if he became a father and it was nice to see him as an evil Slytherin we're really biased against (I blame Harry)

Lyra's introductions about her friends were fun to read, and I'm looking forward to actually meeting them in the next few chapters. Omg, I LOVE the idea of Lyra being friends with someone who's named after Benedict Cumberbatch. I just find it really funny :)

Anyway...I really enjoyed this. It wasn't too long and kept me interested all the way through. Good luck with the Nargles ;)

Author's Response: Hey there, so glad to see you here!

I love Lyra, and I'm so glad that you like her too. I definitely love writing the Scorpius - Lyra bicker sessions; they're so much fun!

Oh she is! I definitely enjoy her not being in a relationship too. It won't last long, haha.

I love them too. They just seem like they have a better ability to be mushy than their usual stern glowers and pressed tailored clothes (they of course still wear them, but the stigma's obviously gone). I blame Harry too :)

I don't even know why I did that, but I love it too!

Thank you so much for the kind review, I hope to see you back.

-Lily xoxo


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