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Review:Dirigible_Plums says:

I'm taking a break from my revision and I thought it was high time that I left some reviews for the Nargle entries. So here I am, wondering why I didn't come here sooner :P

Honestly, the relationship between Lyra and Scorpius cracked me up. I love reading about siblings, especially when they bicker to no end, and that seems to be the gist of their interactions here :P Honestly, their little argument stole the show here, especially with Draco's overly nice roars. Poor Draco. He's without a shadow of a doubt 100% done with these two.

The stuff about Scorpius' relationship with Al was hilarious to read. I'm sure I'd be just as traumatised as Lyra if I was in her position but I, luckily, am not so reading about her pain just made me laugh. The fact that no one else in the family takes her complaints about the PDA seriously XD

I like the fact that Scorpius is sassy as hell but still a Hufflepuff. What a cutie.

Also, this probably seems random but I really like that Lyra's name suits the whole ~theme~ of the family. Sometimes it rubs me the wrong way when I see Scorpius' sister being called Michelle or something for some reason - it's just so ordinary!

Another thing I enjoyed was the style of the chapter. I don't just feel like I'm Lyra, I feel like I'm someone she's confiding in if that makes sense. Almost as if I'm her journal or somethig along those lines. It really engaged me throughout.

Cracking first chapter and congratulations on your nomination!

Plums xo

Author's Response: HEY so excited to finally see you here! Awww, thank you.

I love writing Lyra - Scorpius dialogues. They're so much fun, especially when they're bickering.

I love Scorbus, so it seemed very unnatural not to add it someplace in this story. This story needs more 100% straight couples, haha; I mean already with Al and Scorp it's covering a quarter of the rainbow that the story continues to round out. I mean, bi-Scorpius, gay-Albus-TJ-Ben, ace-Lyra, les-Poppy-Rose, Agender - Marka.

*I know you haven't met some of these characters yet, but if you continue on you'll meet them in no time! Know that Marka isn't in GTOLM, but in the sequel.

I love hufflepuff!Scorpius with all of my heart. He's sassy, but Lyra will (of course) never admit it.

No it's not random at all! It rubs me the wrong way too when the general Scorpius' sister character is called Michelle, or Charlotte, or Halee. Urk.

That totally makes sense, and that's really cool. I'm glad that this first chapter has connected to you in that way.

Thank you so much, and I hope to see you back for another chapter. Congrats on your nom. too, you totally deserve it!

-Lily x

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