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Review:Mirrormirrorlove says:
Hi so that'd chapter was lovely and i am having such a great time reading this story!

Ok so "girls who call other girls sl*ts have a 90% higher chance of dying at age twenty" I read that line and I'm like huh that sounds familiar and then I read your authors note at the end and I am like
AHhhHhhh! Because I just finished watching all of skam and I am insanely obsessed.
So yeah I thought I would comment (I'm ususally far to lazy to comment and just choose to selfishly enjoy ;)

Alright so now that I am commentating I thought I'll review a bit. Ok so I really love all of your couples and you really get the reader to ship them.
I like Lyra however I feel that she can be overwhelmingly much at times
Also I feel that this story is kind of rambling on at points and needs more of a central conflict to tie the whole book together.

Ok thank you for taking your time to write this!!!

Eli

Author's Response: Oh hello and thank you for reviewing! Thank you for your constructive criticism as well. I am wondering however, since you haven't reviewed any other chapters, if you've read them.

Lyra is *supposed* to be overwhelmingly much, so if you don't like then that's okay (I don't really see why you would read this far if you dislike her character), but her outrageousness is a big part of her character and is important to the story.

Thanks for stating your opinion on the rambling. I really don't think that's the case but I appreciate the comment. There is central conflict, but we're only eleven chapters in, so perhaps patience is in order.

You're welcome. Thank you for the review.

-ImaRavenclaw


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