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Review:Freda_and_Georgina says:
Hello! Georgina back here for another chapter.

Yay, we finally got to meet Newt! An interesting take you've got on him here, most people go more for the heart-of-gold-naive-wouldn't-hurt-a-fly side of him but you gave a little bit of sarcasm (especially with the muggle.) I really liked him forgetting the one wizard and it was really interesting seeing some different American creatures.

I was very much a fan of your descriptions and was really drawn in by the last few paragraphs. They were well done and the last line was very much like 'dun dun dun... commercial break!'

Sorry for taking so long to come back to this. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks for the very kind review!

The sarcasm that Newt exhibited just seemed to fit and he had a lot on his mind the first time that he visited New York so I thought that forgetting someones name kind of fit the situation.

The different creatures were also kind of called for, we've all seen and read about the European fantastic beasts so I thought some different ones were called for (there are more coming).

Newt has his work cut out for him this time as the beasts that he is facing will test him to the max.

I never thought about a commercial break but I like the comparison. Thanks.

I have been trying to continue with the story and keep one chapter ahead, but I'm taking care of my grandchildren while their mother recovers from an illness. The story will continue, but may take longer than I had hoped.

Evil Otter

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