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Review:quill2parchment says:
This whole thing was so sweet! Aw I actually had a stupid, silly grin on my face as I read this... Iím a sucker for romances done well, and this one had so much imagery and so much feeling and just everythingÖ.
I love James. I really do. I love that when you wrote his POV (in brilliant 2nd POV by the way!), it sounded exactly like James would sound like in love. Totally absorbed by her and also a little dorky, trying to compare her to Quidditch and running with his friends (in their animal forms).
The idea of him feeling vertigo as he looked into her eyes had me feeling mushy. It was also so perfect because is kind of like that Ė awe inspiring and frightening all at once.
Oh and Lily pulling him by his tie to shut up him up? Thatís so Lily Evans!

Loved it & your writing style!

Author's Response: Aww... thank you so much for stopping by! You are so sweet, and so is this review! Such a nice surprise! :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that it made you smile! A bit of fluff is nice to read from time to time, isn't it?

I love James, too (I suppose you might've guessed it). I'm so glad you thought I captured him well, and Lily too! :)

Thank you so much again for this lovely surprise review! It really made my day!

Lots of love,

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