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Review:crimson quill says:
So I've been meaning to review this for ages but I always seem to be reading on my phone and it's harder to comment then but I've finally got round to that review. yay.

I'm enjoying the story so far, I think it's an interesting plotline as I've not seen many teddy/oc stories as everyone seems to take it as total canon that vic/teddy are a couple! I enjoyed you keeping with the canon of the kiss on the train station at the end of deathly hallows but having your own twist! all is not as it seems! haha.

vic being gay is also an interesting element to the story, again never read victorie like your version of her. your characterisation is really unique of both canon characters. I'm enjoying a more fun and kooky vic oppose to material girl victorie which I see a lot.

I think the split story telling between the main characters is working really well at giving the whole picture. I think I'm most interested in Rory as a character and learning more about her. anyway good job! :)

xx

Author's Response: Firstly, thank-you so much for reviewing!
Thank-you! I'm really happy you're liking the spin I've given to the teddy/vic relationship. It's reassuring to hear that someone likes how I've reimagined Teddy and Vic to be like, I wanted to try something a little different - so i'm glad it's working so far haha
There will be more Rory, for sure!
Hope you keep reading, thanks again :)


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