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Review:Art says:
This chapter,at first seemed to be negligible.Only when I went back and re-read the whole story,that I could really appreciate your extreme skill as an author. As I said earlier,you have an almost unearthly ability of not getting carried away by the flow of your own narrative ; a characteristic which demeans the quality of otherwise good pieces of creative writing. The degree of control you have been exercising over the pace of the story is remarkable indeed.
Another good, yet unappreciated, part of your updates has been near-consistent absence of typos and grammatical errors,a fault which has sadly affected fan-fiction in general.
A big Thank You. For providing me with one of the best pieces of creative writing in recent years.Please update ASAP. And btw,are you still up by many chapters ?

Author's Response: Hello there! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, it really does mean a lot.
I can understand why you might feel a little underwhelmed but when read with the next chapt (or two), I can promise you it will read so much better.

I'm a few more chapters ahead than I was in Dec so chapts should go up more regularly (hopefully about once a month or so at most).

Thanks again

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