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Review:kayt says:
There aren't many well written stories covering this period of time for Harry et al, so I'm really enjoying your take on what happens to them. I had several chapters saved to read - I like a big chunk of story so as to get immersed in all the lovely detail you provide. I think that as with the CB it will be great to reread as a whole when its finished. I have to admit I'm finding it slightly hard to imagine Harry as a computer genius, but I'm working on it! Its just one of the many details that give your story originality.

Author's Response: kayt,

I hope that by the end it will finish satisfyingly.

But, thanks so much for drawing my attention to you difficulty with Harry the computer genius. I'll need to find a place to add some dialog.

Even today, mastering a computer skill is one of the ways for entrepreneurial, shy, and people with just poor social skills can earn a nice life. In Harry's case I'm thinking this is one of the ways to merge into Muggle culture without doing what Hermione does in this story. I thought it fit well and will look to explain more when I think of where to do it in the text.

Also, I need to work on the portrayal of what he actually does, I mean it more as a smart aggregator than a computer genius. He knows how to apply the work of genius.

Thanks for the stimulus kayt.

Bill


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