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Review:PaulaTheProkaryote says:
Hello lovely!

Lol. I'm dying at the start of this chapter. I mean I should be laughing, but TJ and Audrey under the Hufflepuff table is everything.

I 100% could totally see all heck breaking loose if Albus and Scorpius broke up. Especially given the circumstances. The duel was perf. Poor Longbottom.


Expulsion would be perfectly reasonable.

Lily really needs to work on her relationship with Albus because obviously this is going to cause a rift in their relationship!

Poor Lyra! Okay, TJ and Ben. I'd be laughing too.

SoOo...obviously this chapter was too short to satisfy me WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER WHY ARE YOU TORMENTING ME SO?

Loved it and can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Oh hello!

Yes, I know right? When I wrote it I could literally just picture them quivering, on their hands and knees under the table and Lyra being like "what is that smell?"

And Audrey being like: "It's the smell of fear."

But that's only because I really love the movie Get Smart with Steve Carrell.

Poor Neville, and yes of course there would be a million plants in his office.

Yes, yes it would. But that wouldn't help the story, now would it?

They definitely do, especially since they didn't have the best relationship in the world to start with.

Yes, we just need to have Ben and TJ making out whenever Lyra's trying to tell them something.

Your torment will soon be over! Chapter Ten is in the queue!

Thank you so much for loving it!

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