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Review:Niie says:
Really really good chapter! The dialogue for the death eaters and the set up for Hermoine felt a little choppy to me. I think a little bit more intro from Hermoine's POV before this scene would have worked and I think Hermoine would be great at computers. Muggle born even Harry knew Xbox. These are just minor edits I'd consider but over all the flow was good. Especially liked the part where Ron tells Hermoine he loves her.

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