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Review:Niie says:
Really really good chapter! The dialogue for the death eaters and the set up for Hermoine felt a little choppy to me. I think a little bit more intro from Hermoine's POV before this scene would have worked and I think Hermoine would be great at computers. Muggle born even Harry knew Xbox. These are just minor edits I'd consider but over all the flow was good. Especially liked the part where Ron tells Hermoine he loves her.

Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I definitely see what you mean about the setup and the Death Eaters, I will keep it in mind for the next time I edit this chapter. Thank you so much for telling me, I really appreciate it. Maybe she would know computers, but also don't know if she would spend any time keeping up with it after starting Hogwarts.

THank you so much for reading and for your very helpful inputs, I really, really appreciate it! Xx

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