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Review:AbraxanUnicorn says:
Hurrah, an update!

Firstly - poor Ollie and Al :( I completely missed the references to daddy Albus in earlier chapters, and then going back for a re-read, I realised there were plenty of clues hinting towards a child (I really must read more slowly and carefully in future). I can't imagine it being something they will ever get over completely, but I hope Al can help her through the post-traumatic flashbacks eventually.

Scorpius is such a sweetheart for not punching Cassie in the face after how she has treated him in the past. And Draco! I was surprised by his sensitivity, but I guess he's had plenty of time to reflect on his past.

I still can't quite warm to Cassie, even though she's showing us a more positive side to her character in this chapter. I cannot shake the feeling that she's got something big, dramatic and hurtful up her sleeve. I hope it's not going to be more misery for poor James.

Great stuff! Another fabulous chapter. Thank you :)

Author's Response: Gosh you got here quickly! And you've really made me smile so thank you :)

Haha I tried not to make the references overwhelming so hopefully they weren't too obvious, but I'm glad you spotted them on a re-read. Ollie and Al have perhaps been looking like everything's a bit too good to be true, and I wanted to show how that's not yet the case. At some point when I have time I have another novel length story in the works which is ScoRose but covers this time in their lives, so maybe that'll turn up some time over the next few months.

I don't blame you at all for not warming to Cassie. I'll be interested to see what you think of her over the next few chapters.

Thank you for your thoughtful comments and for taking the time to let me know what you think :)

Emma xx

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