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Review:Felpata Lupin says:
Hi, Jayde!
So, I thought I'd stop by to wish you happy new year! (And because I've been meaning to come back to this story for a while...)

Ahahah! For some reason the final line with James telling Albus "Itís his ĎSaviorí thing" amused me a lot. Guess it has something to do with how he reacted when his mother told him the same a few years before. I love that it's just part of the family lexicon. :D

James' reaction at his parents' refusal to buy him a new broom was hilarious too. So childish, but so true to his character (or at least, to how I imagine him to be).
"The Nimbus 2020 is†last yearís†model, Dad! That broom is all worn out, itís†ancient!" Yes, James... sure... :P

His protestes when he realized that Albus was going to have a new broom were even more childish and ridicolous, if possible... on the other hand, I guess a bit of brother's rivalry is inevitable, right? I think I even felt slightly bad for him (but just slightly).

By the way, I liked that Albus is a Slytherin and that Harry is still so fond of him. Not that it is surpring, I just like that.

Ahahah! Poor Harry, panicking when he couldn't see Albus anymore... you wrote it so well, I could feel the tension, even if I knew Albus had probably just walked away for a moment and was just round the corner. And he wasnít even round the corner, just distracted by the shop's window and covered from sight... his embarassment and annoyance at his father were great too! :P

This was another lovely chapter! I need to come back for Lily's chapter soon! But not right now because I've been lazy enough and I should really get out of bed and do things...

Happy 2017! See you soon!
Lots of love,

Author's Response: Chiara!! ♥ You are the absolute SWEETEST! Thank you SO MUCH for this amazing review!! ♥

I'm glad the line about the 'Savior Thing' amused you! :D You're right, it's definitely become part of the family lexicon at this point - I wonder how that will play into the remaining chapters? *whistles innocently*

Hehe! I'm glad you thought James' reaction was hilarious and in-character! It really IS very childish, but I think almost all teenagers go through a phase like that. Haha, yeah, the broom really is ancient, isn't it? :P

I have to admit, I feel a tiny bit bad for James, also, but he's basically spoiled rotten, hearing a little 'no' every now and again will do him some good. :P And YES, there's definitely going to be some brother's rivalry there!

Aww, thanks! I couldn't decide if I should make Al a Slytherin or not, but in the end I'm glad I did. I'm glad you liked that Harry is still fond of him, despite that. I honestly feel that's the kind of parent Harry would be.

Aww, thank you! I'm so flattered that you think I wrote Harry's reaction well, and Al's also! It really makes me feel good that you could feel the emotion and tension going on there!

Thank you SO MUCH for stopping by to read this, I can't wait to see what you think if Lily's Chapter!!

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