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Review:marauderfan says:
A blueberry muffin sounds delicious right now and I just realized that I am hungry and should probably make dinner soon. It will probably be breakfast food because Lyra's breakfast inspired me.

SNITCH PUFFS, yes, I love really goofy analogues between the wizarding world and real one.

It's really cute that her parents showed up to see the game!

Of course the match continues as he is taken to the Hospital Wing, -- Hogwarts in a nutshell. Literally everything at the school is dangerous and no one blinks an eye at it, instead they encourage 14 year olds to play broom sports hundreds of feet in the air. I'm amazed there aren't more lawyers in the wizarding world.

Okay, so you know that thing I mentioned in my previous review about something to ground the reader really in the moment? This chapter is it. This was great! I loved the Quidditch game and how you wrote it focused on specifically the things Lyra is concentrating on - not the commentator, but on what's happening in front of her with the quaffle and who fell.

Oh no, Madam Pomfrey went a little overboard with all the details of how he might have died. haha Seriously, no one wants to hear stuff like that - no reason to unnecessarily worry people! But then again... wizarding world's sense of safety. Falling to your death is just a mundane kind of event it seems. :P

Awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Mmmm yum, I should eat something actually. I woke up two hours ago and I still haven't hit the fridge. Ha ha, I've been having a lot of breakfast for dinner lately. My parents are busy with work and I have exams to study for soOoO I'm kind of just like, "this takes no time to make and is really delicious. Let's do it!"

SAME! And I thought that it was just me!

Oh they show up to see EVERY game. They're really very clingy.

Yeah, it's really funny. I know right? Really it's like: Want to play a dangerous sport? Sure go ahead Harry. Want to have a dangerous class with a Hippogriff? Definitely Harry. Want to entire a tournament with three horribly dangerous task, one of which you'll have to fight Voldemort after? Why the bloody hell not Harry. Oh, going to the candy shop? Sorry Harry that's way too dangerous, you need a permission slip. What was that? I can't hear you with all of that blood in your mouth.

Yeah, Paula actually said it was one of the most interesting matches she'd ever read. I was very pleased. I think I thanked her a little bit to much.

Yeah. I read this fic once where Albus went to see her all of the time to ask how things worked, so I kind of got my idea from that except that this time LYRA DOESN'T WANT TO KNOW.

Thank you so much!

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