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Review:Lea says:
Yaay, you updated! And yet again another great chapter! I must admit I missed the james/seth interaction a little (they're just so cute and awkward together!) but the moment Seth shared with her mother made up everything! It just showed that this story is much more complex than boy meets girl. Seth has other stuff going on in her life than just some arrogant (though cute) prat! It makes the characters also a lot more relatable and interesting, so thank you for doing that!
Now about that poisoning. Poor Seth, she just can't catch a break! Someone really has it out there for her. I just can't seem to figure out who! It must be someone who sucks at potions (which could be anyone really). My first thought is Sam, he has always been around when something happened, but I really don't want it to be him :( he seems like such a nice guy! But it could also be a group, I have a suspicion that Lucas and this dodgy headboy might be linked. And Albus too. He seems a bibit fishy as well to me. I think he might have a secret. I hope Seth and Albus get to talk soon. I'm curious on how he might feel about her after all the rumours.
But anyway, I should probably stop this review, it's already too long! Just keep up the good work! Your writing is really really good!!

Author's Response: Yay, you reviewed :) :) :)

First of all, I know JP was missing... it hurt me a little as well, I must admit :) but, as you so rightly pointed out, for the sake of the story I needed to show that Seth's life does not revolve around him (as much as he might like it to).

That being said, I'm so glad you enjoyed reading about her mum and their complicated relationship... I've been waiting to show more of them for a while :) Also, it makes me really happy to know that you find the characters relatable.

I love all of your theories... they all make sense somehow, don't they? And don't worry, the big Al/Seth encounter is already queued to happen next chapter. I do hope to surprise everyone a little bit so. ;)

Your reviews could never be too long. You've just made my day, seriously. So thank you so much for that and for always reading and taking the time to review. I hope you know how much I appreciate it!!! Have a great day :)

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