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Review:putitonpaper says:
You've totally ruined a vacation day/weekend day for me(!) because the Nancy Drew fanatic in me is already planning to read this entire story from the beginning because I have this annoying feeling that I definitely "know" who's behind the illegal potions (BUT I'M NOT SURE! and it's killing me).

So right now I'm leaning toward Sam but then I'm also thinking that you want me to think it's Sam and Sam is just protecting someone --Hector Chang? But then I'm also like what's up with Al, his ex-girlfriend, and the Head Boy who awkwardly showed up during detention (Edward? Edgar?) BUT WHAT ABOUT VALA? So basically my best theory is that there's some elaborate underground drug ring among all of the characters who I don't like/think are suspicious.

See how you've ruined a future vacation day? Instead of binge watching the Americans/Big Bang Theory while sipping on Starbucks I'll be reading this while still sipping on Starbucks. I'll keep you updated on my crazy theories.

Oh... and btw... spectacular chapter, can't wait for the next! :)

Author's Response: Dear Putitonpaper,

I deeply apologise for ruining your weekend but I'm still glad you feel that way about the story :) I was hoping someone would get curious and try to figure out the mystery behind the illegal potions ;)

I agree that Sam is somewhat suspicious. I also agree that Hector might not look innocent. And yes, Al, his ex-girlfriend and the Head Boy are all kind of weird too :)... And let's not forget about Vala. And what about that strange note Seth received...? ;)

Can I just say that, while I am sorry to have disurbed your vacation day, you are making me so happy with this review... I was worried that readers would expect a solely love-story-centered plot and wouldn't enjoy the whole mystery story line, so it means a lot to me to hear that you've enjoyed the chapter!

Thanks so much for leaving this review and for reading, I can't tell you how much your feedback means to me!


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