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Review:WizardsOnlyFools says:
Wow, I just found this story a few days ago and got hooked so fast that I'm already caught up! This story is so good, from its plot to its characters to its dialogue and humor. Your plot pacing is fantastic! I really didn't think the Graviditas potion would be that big of a plot device, but having it slowly build throughout the story and linking it to the poisoning was brilliantly done. I can't figure out who could be behind it (though Vala seems to know much more then she's letting on haha), so kudos on an intriguing mystery.

I'm definitely not feeling the whole Lucas thing though. Even if he does genuinely like her, Seth couldn't possibly reciprocate the feeling due partly to her understandable caution, but more so because she can't stop thinking another guy named James, whether those thoughts are good or bad. And of course, they couldn't simply just talk to each other about their respective feelings because Seth refuses to admit to any and James is apparently just dumb (can't think of another reason he wouldn't simply have just told her why he didn't want to have sex with her because it clearly wasn't just a normal rejection :P). Oh, teenagers.

Anyway, I'm REALLY into your story, if you couldn't tell. :) It's sooo great and I can't wait for the next chapter! Hopefully soon!!

Author's Response: Ah thank you so much! I can't tell you how happy your review makes me! I really tried to think this story through before writing it so it means a lot to me that you like how it's paced... it moves a little slower than many fanfics so I'm so happy you enjoy it nontheless :)

I know Lucas is not everyone's favourite character right now... he seems to like Seth but, of course, there is always James... The problem is that both Seth and James are terribly stubborn so we'll have to wait and see where they are going :)

Again, I'm so happy you found (and liked) this story. It means a lot to me to get such lovely feedback. The next chapter is on the way and I hope you will enjoy it :) THank you so much!

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