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Review:isaac says:
I always thought that due to growing up under very different situations issues would come up in Harry and Ginny's relationship. Not break up type issues, but issues like this one where Ginny is like you don't tell a 6 year old about his parents murder having grown up with a huge family and both parents living. Harry, having grown up thinking his parents died in a car accident would be especially sensitive to children not knowing how their parents were murdered and would think the right thing to do is to tell the 6 year old the truth causing an argument. Brilliantly done like this entire story. Thank you for writing this. It really does read like cannon though if I had one small criticism I'd add more detail to your action scenes. You build up the set up, but when the scene itself happens you don't show it to us. For example, You don't really show us how Harry and Ron and the rest of the aurors fought and captured death eaters. The action scenes are more like reading a box score than watching a game, while the rest of the story I feel like I'm watching the game. Anyways I don't think I could do what you did, so just my two cents.

Author's Response: I definitely agree with you about the difference in Harry and Ginny's upbringings. So glad you are enjoying the story! And thank you so much for telling me that about the action scenes- I always struggle the most with them and try to avoid writing them because I feel like it's what I do worst, haha, so that's really, really great to hear your advice on it. I appreciate it so much. Thank you so much for that, and for reading and reviewing the story! Xx

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