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Review:Lobelia Saville-Baggins says:
Hello there, lovely!
I was so happy to see a new chapter up! This are really tumbling down, aren't they? Lucas was reluctant, and I don't know if he would have actually asked Seth to brew the potion, but that was exactly the last thing Seth needed right now, on top of everything else. James being pigheaded, the school rumor mill going nuts, Al and Sam both still acting weird as heck, but in different ways...
At least Cass and Asher get a happy-ish ending?
Yeah, this whole story is starting to remind me of a very precarious game of Jenga. Which means the suspense factor is working for you, darling.
Super excited to see the Potter-Woodley families interact, if that ever happens beyond James and Seth.
Vala has a few surprises up her sleeve doesn't she? She's not telling us everything.
I hope you and the bf are taking care of yourselves. Don't stress overly much, okay? Good luck with your research position! I wish you many breakthroughs.
I'll see you next chapter!

Author's Response: Hey there! I am so sorry it took me so long to respond. With work and everything I didn't get to doing much else lately :(. But I want you to know that your review instantly made everything better :).

And YES, things are spiralling. And Cassie and Asher will have the most lavish wedding anyone could imagine, of course :)

I like the jenga metaphor! And I am super glad that you feel this way about the story.

I know there hasn't been much family interaction BUT there is definitely one planned for the nearer future ;)

And you're so right about Vala... she is acting a little bit weird but maybe it's something nobody would expect. ;)

Thank you so so so much for taking the time to review this chapter, it means a lot. I hope you can forgive me for taking so long to reply. I love ALL of your reviews and you are amazing!


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