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Review:august says:
Hooray, an update! I always get so excited when I see you updated! And again such a great chapter! I feel really bad for Seth, it's as if the whole castle is after her. Luckily she has Katie and Sam. Although, I don't fully trust Sam yet. He's a bit of a mystery to me. Same with Vala, although I start to think she's genuinely nice to Seth. At the beginning I thought she might have a second agenda as well, but let's hope that not everyone has it out for poor Seth. I'm really hating Lucas for what he did, but it seems that he was a bit reluctant to do it, which makes me think he started to like Seth. So this is probably not the end of Lucas in the story (which I kind of like).

I'm so curious for the next chapter. You already mentioned a Valentine's dance twice, so I'm hoping that will be next. I'm also hoping that Seth and Albus will have an encounter soon. I'm wondering what his reaction is to all of the rumours. They seemed kind of friendly at the beginning of the story. Also, Seth and James need to be loccked up in a room so they can finally communicate, haha. They're both so stubborn and proud!

Again, excellent writing and can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: And I'm so excited about your review! This is the best part of uploading a new chapter, getting feedback such as yours. This really means a lot!

I know, Seth's not doing great at the moment, but she's strong, she can manage :). I'm really intrigued that you don't fully trust Sam... he has been acting a little weird lately... ;) And Vala... well, that'S a whole other mystery :)

You are totally right about Lucas... this was not the end of him... and he is not really the bad guy here ;)

In fact, the Valentine's dance and the events leading up to it is the main focus of the next chapter... as per usual, such events bring all of Hogwarts together, which can get awkward fast. It's entirely possible that Albus and Seth meet there ;).

Thank you so much for this amazing review! I know I've said this, but your lovely words mean a lot to me and I was really happy when I saw the review :) You are wonderful.

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