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Review:Shiv says:
Well... I don't think i need to say how bloody good this story is getting... i mean i have never been more engrossed in a fic before.And i don't know why i have this feeling that seth will not be paired with james for the ball but with ALBUS!!!
Wouldn't that be totally crazy !!
And everyone will think that albus will not go with her because who wants to attend a dance with the girl who apparently poisoned him ( well...we know she didn't ..but thts what everyone thinks) but contrary to everyone's thinking he accepts to go with her and can you just imagine james reaction !!!
I dont know ...its just a theory
Also this lucas guy seems very shady ...even before james said all those things about him...i mean given seth's reputation at the moment, a guy will only ask her on a date if he either likes her very much and is an extremely good guy or if he has an ulterior motive ...and i guess we all know that there aren't a lot of good guys
Also sam's question in the previous chapter worries me. He has been a great friend to seth and i really don't want something to happen to that relatioship specially because of a misunderstanding.
So yeah thank u for this amazing fic ..hope u update soon !

Author's Response: So glad you like the plot developments. It took me a while to get there but certain things needed to be told first...haha. Honestly, it means so much to hear how much you like the story and can I just say that I am SO excited about your theories.

I think that yes, Seth and James going to the ball together does not only seem unlikely at the moment (considering their latest run-in) but also would be too deus ex machina to be plausible. It's quite interesting that you see Albus accompanying her... we haven't heard anything of or about Albus since the beginning of summer term and it is indeed deliberate. Albus's view on the entire situation and the rumours is not clear so I agree, it would be quite the scandal if he went to the ball with Seth :)

Lucas may not be the way James has portrayed him, but that doesn't mean that he might not be shady ;) Considering her reputation, I think you're right... dating Seth would be quite the social risk at the moment...

And yes, Sam was acting a little weird. I'm so happy that so many people picked up on it.. but I don't want to give away too much ;).

Thank you thank you thank you so much! For reading and for this wonderful review. I really appreciate that you took the time to write it and I hope you know that you've made my day :)


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