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Review:yaya says:
Ahhh! I love/hate you so much. Hate because I'm such an impatient person and I can't even handle not knowing what's going to happen next. Love because obviously this is a wonderful piece of work and you can just tell that you have written everything with such care and precision. I truly hope you take such pride in what you're doing. The story is engaging and hilarious.

I love that Seth is going on a real date! And you've captured perfectly what it's like for an awkward, self-conscious teenager on her first date.

Katie is still a favorite obviously. She's the embodiment of what me and my best friends say to each other when we are down too much for too long-- "Love you but woman up!"

So I didn't review last chapter (sorry!) but Sam is making me suspicious. Like, his question about the potion going bad? I don't trust him right now... but I appreciate that he's being a good friend to Seth.

And James... where do you even start with this kid?? I almost feel bad for him. He's handling his crush so poorly because he's dealing with a girl that's sooo oblivious. But I must say, I love how you torture them haha

James/OC is now one of my favorite ships to read and it started with this story right here! So thank you :).

Author's Response: Oh I hope the love-part outweighs the hate part... haha. I know that I'm rather slow on updates. I really want the chapters to be exactly the way they are supposed to be and I rewrite them a lot before uploading so that's why there are month-long gaps between updates :). I am so glad that you still enjoy the story and the way it is written, it means a lot to me to hear this :)

I thought it was time for Seth to date :) And there is really no other way for her than to be awkward about it. I guess in some ways dating in general is just an immensely awkward situation, isn't it?

I agree, Katie is the best. She knows exactly what to say and how to say it :) It's awesome that you have the same thing going with your friends!

Sam IS definitely acting strange and you're right, it is not something to be dismissed easily. He really is a friend to Seth but something might be off... ;)

And James is ... well, James. He's both adorable and completely irritating... which makes the whole thing so much fun :)

I'm honoured that my story introduced you to the wonderful world of James/OC and I thank you for this lovely review. It just means so much to get such feedback and it really makes me want to go and write right away :)


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