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Review:Asteria says:
Oh how I've missed this story and Seth and James, I'm so glad that you're back.
I have so much love for this chapter and the writing is just as excellent as always. What I also love about this fic is that it's not just focused on their relationship but it has other really good story lines along with it (the Al one I'm loving) which just makes it even more interesting.
James is a bit of an idiot at the best of times, a lovable idiot, but an idiot nonetheless but the love/hate James/OC fics are always my favourite. Plus I'm so glad you've dragged it out and they're not together yet but we've still had many great James/Seth scenes like the phone box and the one at the Potter's. If they get into a relationship too early on I find it gets a bit soppy and a little more boring because I miss all the angst.
I love James a lot, despite some of his slightly bad moves. Part of me thinks (and hopes if I'm honest) that he rejected her at his house not because he wanted to but because he knew she'd had no experience and he wanted it to be a lot more for her than some alcohol and regret fueled night after what her family said about the phone box incident. If that's the case I will love him even more than I already do.
And onto this Lucas guy, at first I thought he seemed pretty decent actually but now after what James said I'm not so sure. A small part of me hopes he does turn out to be nice because poor Seth deserves at least one good thing in her life. However, the rest of me hopes he does turn out to be a player because:
A) I do love me some angst.
B) James can swoop in and teach him a lesson.
C) James and Seth
Anyways, I love this fic and I hope the next update isn't too far away.

Author's Response: I'm glad I'm back too :). I'm really sorry I made everybody wait for so long but I was stuck somehow and it took a few lovely, encouraging, urging reviews to get over that haha.
Can I just say, that I'm so glad you enjoy the plots besides the romance? I never set out to write a solely romance-focused fic and it means a lot to hear that its appreciated.
James IS an idiot... I mean, I guess we all are at 16/17? At least a bit...haha. I'm also a really big fan of the love/hate thing and James II is my main man in the HP-verse but, like you said, it always bothers me when they get together too fast... instant love seems quite unrealistic between two characters that are so fundamentally different as, for instance, Seth and James and the love/hate thing always seems unrealistic if the issues are resolved too quickly into the story.
I like James too, despite his flaws. I guess he's just fighting with himself (concerning various issues which I don't want to give away yet :) ) But he definitely rejected Seth for a reason, or rather several reasons (may they be good or not so good) and not because he is not attracted to her (because he obviously is).
About Lucas, I'd say he's not a knight in shiny armour, but then again, who is? We all have flaws and I make sure that my characters have too... no one is strictly bad or good. But I agree, Seth deserves something nice to happen to her...the next chapter will show ;)
Thank you so so so much for this lovely, long and kind review. I can't say it enough; it just means the world to me to get such feedback!
You are a wonderful person.


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