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Review:Neville Longbottom says:
Renee!

After the cuteness of the last chapter, this one was like a punch in the gut with sad feels. Well, more like bittersweet feels.

Sweet, because Lily showed her first signs of magic! And I actually really liked the way you wrote it - children usually first show signs of magic when emotions are running high (as Iím sure you know), so it isnít a surprise that Petuniaís behavior towards Lily is what triggered it in the first place.

It was also sweet that Petunia covered for Lily - she didnít tattle like I thought she would, and I wondered why that is until I realized that she was scared, so it would make sense that she wouldnít want to advertise what had just happened. Especially because she was sure the adults wouldnít believe her. Which is less sweet. :(

Lily being left out of the party because Petunia was worried about what the other girls thought of her was also really sad. Poor LilyÖ being the younger sister really sucks sometimes.

Clearly, this is the point where their relationship will start to change. Everything that happened put a strain between them that was never there before, and as Lilyís magic inevitably becomes more prominent, it will only get worse.

Sorry, Iím making a lot of ďitís sad because we know itíll end badlyĒ commentsÖ Itís mostly because youíve done a really, REALLY good job sticking to the characterization weíve seen of Petunia and Lily thus far, and now Iíve sort of adopted this whole story as a head canon at this pointÖ

Merlin, youíre really good. This story is amazing!

But alas, this will have to be the last review for the time beingÖ Iíll have to come back and read the rest of the chapters and review again soon!

Donít worry though, Iíll be sending along some other gifts for you before this challenge ends. Plus an extra special something if I can swing itÖ :D
(Oh, and you should totally make an AQ&A page. Iíd love to leave a few questions for you at some point. ;) )

Renee, you are a wonderful storyteller, and you should know that this story is SO amazing. Itís well written, itís creative, and itís unique and Iím so glad that I got to read it!

Neville Longbottom

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