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Review:Neville Longbottom says:
Renee!

Back for chapter 3!

This one was the best yet. It was absolutely darling. Completely wonderful. Beautiful. Fantastic. Awesome. Amazing… I’m running out of adjectives here…

Basically, I loved this chapter.

This moment is so, SO precious. Petunia and Lily’s relationship is so sweet and loving — it’s hard to imagine their relationship turning into what it became as teenagers. Very bittersweet.

I know that I’ve said that you’re amazing writing children, but this is your best yet. The way you managed to morph from reality to fantasy and back is PURE PERFECTION. Seriously, one second they’re playing on Lily’s bed, the next they’re on a ship in the middle of the ocean. You managed to capture a child’s imagination perfectly just by wholeheartedly jumping into the world they’re imagining and writing it like it’s real - with a few modifications of course (“…caught it just south of the rocking chair.” -- That made me giggle).

Another wonderful chapter Renee! I’m off to the next one!

Neville Longbottom

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