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Review:Neville Longbottom says:

Iím back!

Wow, this is another wonderful chapter!! I liked reading from
Lilyís POV, especially because we get to see Lilyís obvious
admiration and adoration of her big sister. Petunia is
everything to her, and itís obvious that Petunia loves being
the big sister.

Lilyís determination to be just like Petunia is so telling.
Clearly sheís a Gryffindor through and through (not that
anyone ever doubted it), and putting all of that determination
and loyalty into being just like her big sister. Itíll be
interesting to see the point where Lily stops wanting to be
like PetuniaÖ as Iím sure she will eventually.

The bicycle part was my favorite bit, to be honest. I loved
that you brought up Lilyís desire to fly. That was a really nice
touch that added a whole new level of emotion to the scene.

And perhaps Iím reading too much into it, but I canít help but
feel like itís all a bit of a metaphor for Petunia and Lilyís
relationship - eventually, Lily will be moving too fast for
Petunia to catch up, and Petunia will be left behind as Lily
goes off and joins a world that sheíll never be part of.

And when that happens, Petunia wonít be able to be there to
pick Lily back up. Which has got to hurt, for both of them.

Anyway, Iím off to read the next chapter! This story is really
fantastic so far! You should be proud of this story!

Neville Longbottom

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