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Review:Marshal says:
Here for the Slytherin Hotseat love. To start, you picked an amazing song to be inspired by. I love FOB and in reading the story the song is so fitting!

The story is really good. I love the dynamic you played with here. I am always a sucker for forbidden love and this was like an ultimate version of it. Not only were you pulling the characters apart by forced circumstances but personal choices as well. So heart breaking. You also put in a very very nice steamy bit that was rather enjoyable to read.

I think you balanced everything very well in this story and you made the characters believable. While the story is a bit AU it is still cannon esque in the way the characters act and behave as a whole. In the end you feel bad for what Harry will feel and your heart breaks for Draco as he makes the impossible choice between romantic love and love of his family and his own life. Too bad Draco didn't listen to Harry who this time is right about Dumbledore.

Still, it was a fantastic story and so true to character. Really I could ramble and rave here about this story cause it was just that good and I truly enjoyed this read, and I am glad I stopped by.

Author's Response: Hi Marshal! Thanks! I love FOB too and could not help but write a story to those lyrics. I also love the forbidden love aspect, and love the idea that these boys could have had more feelings for each other than they'd ever have let on in the books. And yes, there were a lot of factors pulling them apart already, giving Draco plenty of reason behind his decision to end things with Harry. And of course, a little steamy bit is always fun to add in. ;)

I'm so glad you think the story is well balanced and the characters believable. Of course it is AU, but I wanted to write it in a way that could seem totally possible, a moment you could easily slot into the canon timeline and have it seem very much like it belongs there. And yes, I feel terrible for Harry because his heart's about to be broken and he doesn't understand, but I feel just as bad if not worse for Draco, who knows he can never come back from this crime he intends to commit.

Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed it! And thanks so much for stopping by!


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