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Review:Violet Potter 434 says:
Yay another chapter for me!

yet again this was really good, considering how short it was, you squeezed a lot in with out giving me too much information.

is the next chapter going to be at Hogwarts or is there going to be another few chapters before the end of the summer?

anyways keep writing because I want to get to the know the plot better

from adoring me xx

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story so much! Yes, I didn't have many ideas for Jay, since I'm not the biggest fan of Pulsation, but I did what I had to do to introduce him and his situation. It will be easier to write him at Hogwarts. Speaking of Hogwarts, next chapters are journeys and arrivals, so you will get to see some of your favourite next gen characters!

I definitely will keep writing, the fourth chapter is WIP and almost done, and I really hope you read it. Thank you so much for your review and have a really awesome day!


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