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Review:dreamgazer220 says:
HAI LIZ! Apparently I haven't read this chapter.

But whew, what a lot for poor Piper! She doesn't know what's happening and then she's being whisked away to some strange place - the Weasley living room - the next. I loved that Tonks was the first to approach her, though, and I hope they can find some sort of bond with their ability. It's so sad that Tonks can't change, though :(

I think you did a good job of glossing over the details that we know from HBP. I know you struggled with this while writing, but your end result really worked for you. Piper would absolutely be overwhelmed with everything and hopefully she gets a good night's rest!

Again, it's amazing how you've improved over the years as an author :) This is already so much more realistic, and I can't wait to see her first encounter with Ron.

Keep up the great work!


Author's Response: Well, if you remember, HBP had only just come out when I was a few chapters into this, hahaha! So, hopefully a lot more realistic!

This story would not be here if it weren't for you, so I have to thank you and snuggle you. I actually did send this to you a while ago, though, but we were SUPER busy at the time and the only reason I remember is because when my computer died I was like "PLEASE TELL ME I SENT SOMETHING TO JILL!"

I did struggle a lot, but it's so easy to go into inner monologue and side conversations which means I don't have to tread too much on copyrighted material, haha.

I don't remember if I have plans to bring Tonks back, but maybe they have a one-shot off screen, lol.

Thank you so much, dear! It means a lot!

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